Bitterness Comments

I'm not sure the depth of these intense emotions was reached in this writing. I saw the capitalization of the letters but somehow, I just don't think they really tell that story well enough. There is a distance contained in this writing that seems to stay away from the hard stuff. I guess that means this is real because this is one of the most terrible things that can happen to a child. What a suffering was done here! GW62

you, bring out emotions in this poem very touching.... very good another 10....