Sunday, October 7, 2007

Bitterness Comments

Rating: 4.0

They say that your home
Is your sanctuary
Your only shelter
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Lexy Sogl
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Sonny Rainshine 26 February 2008

Beautiful arrangement that flows like a mountain brook. Powerful undertones and thought-provoking lines. Good work. For some reason it reminds me of a famous Stephen Crane poem in which the narrator (when asked why he sits in a desert eating his own heart, replies: '...because it is bitter, and because it is my heart.'

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