Saturday, December 17, 2016

Bitter Winter Wind Comments

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the winter drought is like a spear
no rain will fall till June
my eyes conceal a final tear
as clouds obscure the moon
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 20 December 2016

Excellent rhyme and graphic, i must add.

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Barry Middleton 20 December 2016

I am not fond of winter. In Florida it is generally dry and sunny but I still get into my winter mood.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 December 2016

Wonderful expression. You are such a huge inspiration for other poets. Awesome way to write about cold winter. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 20 December 2016

Thanks as always for the generous praise.

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