Warmness… that`s what I know,
As soon as your skin meets mine.
Out from your touch emitting slow
Is a bliss bitter sweetly divine.
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Ahhh I can drift of in to a dreamy daze of reconciled bliss after rteading this. So very open and tender that you nestle in the heart of it, close your eyes and be set adrift on the waves of emotion that match your heartbeat. Superb wording and catchy rhythm make this so smooth to read and enjoy with a smile forever etched upon your face. So sweet, that if it was rice paper you'd want it to top your favourite dish, everytime! Really good Brandi, keep it up! Dale :)
I love the way you interpret your feelings are thoughts into such delicate words. Your poem speaks lots of words of love and life to me ahh only if the world were as sweet and beautiful as your thoughts. Snow Cambridge