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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
Monday, November 3, 2008

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You seem to rise again,
Like an advancing angel,
Over the sun,
You flutter,
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Fred Babbin 16 November 2008

Nicely written poem.

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Michael Gale 04 November 2008

Great poem filled with great imagery. An easy tenner. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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LOVE IT! ! ! GREAT WRITE! GREAT PIECE FROM START TO END!

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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
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