Sunday, September 1, 2013

Bitter Silence Comments

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Bitter silence, words of few
Lips sealed, never parting in view
Sweet pallets frozen in time
Heart in disarray until morn's dew
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Ron Pate
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Princess Lilypad 01 September 2013

Sounds like a terrible betrayal. This left me feeling cautious as a reader, very nicely formed and relayed.

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