Monday, June 3, 2013

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A silent anger, a hidden shame
An unbelievable story, full of pain
To whom I tell my secrets and fears
I fear of you and me, of unexpected tears
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Mehri Mehraban
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David Reeves 16 December 2017

Hi Methri a poem of truth, truth we all have to endure at sometime in life very beautifully composed. The innocence of children can heal much pain hence why I sometimes indulge myself in my Christmas poetry for children. A time when we have all believed in Santa just sad we has to grow up.

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 September 2016

Hi Ms Mehri, Beautiful! A silent anger, a hidden shame An unbelievable story full of pain The pain in the words touches the heart, exquisite write. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.

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V P Mahur 28 March 2014

dear Madam, It is a lovely poem' Thanks for a nice read. Please reply.

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Mohsen Fard 06 November 2013

Great, Yes, It is called the ugly truth Depends on us, sweet or like pain of a tooth

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Marvin Brato 22 October 2013

meaningful poem, worth the read!

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