Monday, February 9, 2009

Bitter Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why can't I write about anything else but you
This can't be writer's block I'm going through
If you're my muse, I'm not amused
I'm getting tired of you
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Sonya Florentino
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Patti Masterman 05 September 2009

We just can't let go of that bone once we grab onto it..we're like a dog with a bone, lol. Great descriptions of how that familiar emotion feels. (crossing myself now; to keep it far away from me) .

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Lynda Robson 18 February 2009

Sometimes it is hard to move on, a very painful write, it is always sad when a love affair ends, 10 Lynda xx

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Anita Atina 14 February 2009

I like the grittily honest style of this poem and the frayed emotion it conveys.

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rago rago 11 February 2009

beautiful and to be remembered,

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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