Bitter Is Heaven Comments

Later I had its tastes Sweeter blended with tastes bitter It happens with all the poets but a good poem makes its place sooner or latter.

everyone wants to go to heaven but no one wants to die.

Beautiful write we reach for the desirable which can turn out to be sweet and sour! Thank you so much for your comments on my poem 'The Essence Is You'

some times our desire may not fulfill the way we like it.but reaches us in some other form..........nice

The fruit evading your grasp is compared to heaven that is beyond our grasp while alive! Great write, Deepak!

It's a wonderful poem with pretty imagery.