I was alone near my husband, 
I was afraid of near my husband.
When he came closed to me and, 
made me unveil, I was gazing the floor.
                
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what an ink rani! ! ! u have told everything of the first night in just a few words.very nice.
Lovely description of an experience of a bride at bridal night. I enjoyed reading it

 
                     
                
Madam Rani, you have done the best use of the words Silvery pigeons those swelled out and peeped out of the silky cage. very appreciable it is!