Thursday, November 8, 2012

Bitter Experience Of My First Night Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was alone near my husband,
I was afraid of near my husband.
When he came closed to me and,
made me unveil, I was gazing the floor.
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Rani Madhubala
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Sushil Kumar 01 December 2012

Madam Rani, you have done the best use of the words Silvery pigeons those swelled out and peeped out of the silky cage. very appreciable it is!

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 November 2012

what an ink rani! ! ! u have told everything of the first night in just a few words.very nice.

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Asif Andalib 21 November 2012

Lovely description of an experience of a bride at bridal night. I enjoyed reading it

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