Bitter End Comments

Such a sad heartache Alesia. Heartfelt write for sure...

Hi Alesia, this is deep, I enjoyed every line. The flow is perfect, ... I like the alliteration on the first line.

Our love extinguished like a flame in the wind and our romance has come to its bitter end........of course, love sometimes comes to end with a bitter feeling incase of lacking togetherness. A beautiful poem nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing.....10

It is so true that love can hurt! If there is no possibility of a coming back together once again, learn to forget the past and wait for a new dawn! Initially the memories may be haunting, but time can heal every wound! Allow time to heal your hurt! An emotive write, Alesia!