Bitter But Better Comments

I have to burn within me that is the point. A nice poem and recited in such spirit and enthusiasm.

A very nice comment from Allen and I agree. Just finished all of your poems and this is my favorite so far. You show real promise and I look forward to reading new poems soon. Not sure that you are aware but Allen is one of the top poets on the site. : -)

Excellent poem Anand you artistically express in your words something deep within all of us, the need to grow despite all of man's imperfect. Life is indeed a trial but never let any test take the fire out of your heart as you strive for the best in what ever you pursue. It istrue that our tribulations define us even when we don't like them we can choose to learn and grow from them, your outlook is bright and mature, may you continue to shine as a poet brighter every day.