Bitter Battle Comments

poetic in words...flowing with depth brilliantly thought-of piece.. inspiring and painting a picture of reality in life LIFE..is really a bitter battle.....bettersweet.. thanks for sharing... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

The consumer’s experience is the acme of the Brand; You’ve just been had: welcome to the Promised Land! nice words, great imagery, i dont think i have understood it fully well beacuse there are so many messages in it.........u are teacher....blessed are ur students..

This is a very effective piece indeed...I felt the words of inspiration....yet the thing is when you go to the real world...to face all the challenges and the uphill battle is easier said than done though...yet, if these can't speak to the core of the reader's heart..no work can i think..strong /effective piece..nice one sir...10+++ regards shan

beautiful like history..well penned poem..grace

A thought provoking poem! I only hope this Kaly-yug don't end in spelling out our doom! 10+ -Raj Nandy

powerful words Subroto...and yes; truthful too...you have beautifully expressed your thoughts in well framed lines...good work...10

Very true, Bitter battle - for many, its for survival For me its a battle to create a space of joy For survival, we need a deep breath That's seen possible everywhere People keep their breath in tact In spite of scorching heat of life and its styles. So what is the need of the hour? 'Joy of life'... That doesn't come without a cost. Bitter Battle... only brings it to the tower. Good one. enjoyed the read. Could think so much on this theme. Thank you.

for you to bolt past, posture or be left behind.....i really like the flow of that line with pace of the sylabols good read friend

All those who know the tribulations of the community, Know the disease that affects its members’ affinity: Janus-faced politicians whose principles we uphold, Are petty tyrants carved from a hellish mould.................whole poem is good but these lines are fascinating................