Sunday, October 23, 2005

Bitter As An Unripe Orange Comments

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Bitter as an unripe orange
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Wanda Swim Strunk
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Mary Nagy 31 October 2005

Wanda, this really is a wonderful poem. I like how you've structured it as you have...very fun yet, a nice message underneath. Sincerely, Mary

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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 26 October 2005

this is good and silly. it's like a smile with black teeth. Jake

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This is such a fun poem! Thanks for sharing...very, very clever.

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