Bitter And Twisted Comments

Good poem, I sense some humorousness vengeance between the lines.

'She wants a bit of, whats, not hers to taste forbidding fruit, or burst.' forbidding fruit and pain so often cross paths in consequences details shifting from shadows to light in mist ripples

Untrue words! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Very interesting! ! The last lines open up the suspense. loved it.