Bitter And Twisted Poem by Annette Aitken

Bitter And Twisted

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Bitter and Twisted

She sits there like the quiet church mouse
thinks butter wouldn't melt her mouth
behind her evil eyes are bleeding
the jealous bitch starts her scheming.

Untrue words come spilling out
that gaping hole she calls a mouth
behind the sweetness lies a whore
tries to take from what is yours.

Selfish bitch in a world of delusion
thinks its love, but so confusing
she wants her cake and eat it to
if only the bitches husband knew.

She wants a bit of, what's, not hers
to taste forbidding fruit, or burst.

Tuesday, July 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: jealousy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Tye 14 February 2017

Good poem, I sense some humorousness vengeance between the lines.

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Terry Craddock 12 September 2016

'She wants a bit of, whats, not hers to taste forbidding fruit, or burst.' forbidding fruit and pain so often cross paths in consequences details shifting from shadows to light in mist ripples

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2016

Untrue words! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 July 2016

Very interesting! ! The last lines open up the suspense. loved it.

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