Monday, November 9, 2009

Bitten Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will love you forever, with no end
Taking your memory to my deathbed, with eternity to spend
Keeping you alive in my thought, you cannot die
Together always I will be happy, I will never cry
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Deborah Cromer
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Chris Blazo 18 August 2012

Another one! Great work.

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Nikunj Sharma 10 November 2009

the flow, the ease and the simplictiy of your words, makes one wonder, how you create poems out of thin air. this one conveys so much, it has pain, anguish, realisation and a longing. its wonderful to read to your work, , , , , , , , , , Niks

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this is fine, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , good poetry

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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