Crawl into my shoes
To taste the bitter-sweet
Bits of life
Your cowardice
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Thank you toato my friends for the beautiful feedback. Iam facing a glitch as Iam not able to acknowledge the feedback nor Iam able to see the feedbacks immediately.
Bitterness! ! Facing the odds of love and life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Pain of betrayal is everlasting, nevertheless one cannot have status quo and need to move on...A fantastic poem.10+++
Painful truth of this life, those to whom we surrender often runs away taking our innocence. Keep away from such narrow minded self-centered people around. Wonderful poem with profound message.Loved it.
I would invite you to read my poems (I have five so far) but I am a new poet and Poem Hunter has not activated them yet. Some were posted three days ago. I wonder how long it will take to activate them...? I am very surprised. I thought people would be able to read my poems as soon as I posted them!
Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticize them you'll be a mile away, and you'll have their shoes!
It is essential to be in others shoes to be aware of their sorrows and joys it needs love supported by courage.Meaningful poem.....10