Bit Poems, Not Bitter Comments

Very sharp observations about life and the ironies of life. It is an intuitive poem that strikes out at the sensor view of measuring success in material terms. Our us-ness has gone, dry river bed, careful not to kick us – all these point out to an excellent and acute power of observation. Hypocrisy is the skin that the poet peels of, to display the succulent or bitter fruit within it.

many lines are quotable having universal quality...a good read, meaningful!

Bitter truths as well. On the canvas of memories you have drawn them and their sketches are being redrawn for us now perhaps..