Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Biscuit Breaker Comments

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He comes to see her,
and alway with lingered hope,
and she smiles a little and turns her face,
with a deaf ear towards him,
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Rafique Farooqi
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Rehana Nazli 07 August 2009

Good story described with nice flow that generates curiosity in the reader's mind. well done.

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Deborah Harvey 04 July 2009

So poignant beautiful expression of feeling.

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Christopher Flynn 03 July 2009

A cheating heart leaves behind A saddend fate And a new life An interesting poem that catches the dynamics of a failing relationship and the excitement of an affair.

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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