garnets red blaze is like a fire in the night
saphire lights up the ocean with a sparkle of light
emeralds make the grass be such a light green.
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It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal
Dear Emma, there is no such word as 'beautifuler'. More beautiful will do just fine. Since garnets are my favorites, I loved that you started your poem with the best. Read my - Who Am I - Adeline