Thursday, July 14, 2011

Birthmark Comments

Rating: 5.0

She came from the ground,
That beautiful woman!
Made from mud and soil
Lying to you, lying alone
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Stefanie Fontker
COMMENTS
Bianca F. 30 August 2011

Love the structure! And the idea that the woman cannot help that she's beautiful and that people want her.

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without a name Face 18 August 2011

wow... I love how you portray it.... so meaningful... the way she flinches... that'd be like me...... Well played well done.

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 August 2011

Feminity is a statement of womanhood which challenges the incrimination of adolescence.Depends how much hands care.Synthesis of womahood starts here.

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Shannon Wade 21 July 2011

wooow this is very deep and i love the word play that you used. check my poem redemption and four tear drops

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 July 2011

Nice effective poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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