Birthing Comments

Hi Nosheen, Marvellous poem. Don't just open your eyes Rise like a bird in flight... Yes, soar on your wings, that would take you to new heights., new skies. For, There's there's still a lot to know lot to explore.... And of course, The world didn't end when your heart broke. The positive energy you, your poem exude! Wonderful. Loved reading this. A 10 and onto my poem list. Thank you.

Your optimism is infectious. Short, beautiful poem of hope. (10)

Thank you for writing this and thank God I read it today. Don't just open your eyes, but rise like a bird in flight, / measuring the limitless space / There's still a lot to know, / a lot to explore I will try to believe that, my dear friend, since it comes straight from your gentle heart. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list

Wonderful and very inspiring poem. So true and so touching.

There's still a lot to know, a lot to explore Life didn't end when your heart broke. It's a broken heart that is capable of performing the miracles, thoughtful and beautiful.

Never let the hope die and never let the faith dim. There is lots to conquer.beautiful poem.

Light hidden after dark, joy hidden in sorrow. Optimistic and bright!

This is a brave poem. Then last line proves this. It is the most objective statement of the most subjective experience. It show you gave already taken a long journey of self discovery; what you have learned is expressed in the first four lines in the clearest imagery if effort and hope. That soaring bird is your victory over disappointment, and you share that victory with us.

Nosheen Hi, So a broken heart is like night darkness before it is dawn of awareness, very beautiful thought and poem. this is really true.

It is a gorgeous poem on dawn with hope having groovy collocation. I quote... There's still a lot to know, a lot to explore Life didn't end when your heart broke. Thanks for sharing.

Rising from darkness to a new day, new hope- - -the spirit is so nicely woven in this short and lovely poem. The day births in tender tones of golden, soaking up the tears of darkness Don't just open your eyes, but rise like a bird in flight, measuring the limitless space

The concept of morning is woven into all of our hopes and anticipations regarding a better future than what we face now. You have succinctly and vividly captured that hope in the lines of this piece, and released it as encouragement to your readers. Thank you.

So true! Life does not end with heartbreak. There's still a lot to learn and time to grow.

Measuring the limitless space! ! And to embrace the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.