Saturday, August 18, 2012

Birthday Wishes For Seniors Comments

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A Rose is not a Rose without a thorn,
When the edges become a little worn,
The beauty within stands the test of time,
May your wisdom mature like fine wine....
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Philo Yan
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Mahtab Bangalee 17 June 2019

superb expression- A Rose by any other name, Would just sound so tame. Such beauty is the Rose, Even with thorns, it shows.

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Yash Shinde 23 October 2012

I liked version one very beautifully composed and well written..............wonderful meaning

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Deepak Manchanda 09 September 2012

I preferred Version Two...such beauty is the rose, even with thorns it shows!

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Philo Yan 18 August 2012

Thanks Leslie and Alon for your comments.

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Leslie Philibert 18 August 2012

Like the use of a famous quote from Shakespeare, nice write

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Alon Dy 18 August 2012

nice one. good poem with good meanings. feel free to comment my poems as well.thank you

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