***birthday Wish*** Comments
On a fine morning, by the side of a shore:
You shine like a bright sun.
On a fine evening,
You bloom as a jasmine: spreading your lovely fragrance to all.
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such a beautiful work here.. such a lovely poem, i like it.. thanks for sharing..
A very heartwarming write. I am sure your friend will treasure this wonderful poem. A beautiful wish and a tribute. so lovingly penned.
What a beautiful wish on a friend's birthday. Your friend must be elated n proud to receive such a lovely token of love, warmth n tenderness. A 10.
Thank you for the read and comment dear Ma'am. I am happy to see your ratings on my work!
Beautiful rendition of 'sweet words'. Lovely poem elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Queeny.
The wish will surely be granted to such a soul full wish...regards
Such a wonderful gift in your wish of your birthday. a touch in a heart feels in your poem
This is such a cheery, light poem, so enjoyed; D
I think this is especially written for me........................... Thanks a Lot. So Nice with Simple and understanding.
ohh...how nice wishes are being made for a friend..almost touched me..10
This is so well written that reveals the true friendship between the two.
a friend is a friend always not merely on birthdays. but on those days he certainly shines. nice poem voted10 surya
lovely wish, every friend will wish for such a wish.... nice...
Queeny dear, This is what is expected of modern Englishe poets. Simple language with striking imagery and touching subject. Beautiful...........10++++++
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8/1/2025 4:27:13 PM # 1.0.0
A sincere and passionate birthday wish that bears definitely the fragrance of jasmine and beauty of blooming rose....10