Friday, August 26, 2005

Birthday Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

dandelion fuzz
spikes past
a hummingbird’s
slapshot blurred wings
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Keith Gaboury
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Raynette Eitel 29 September 2005

This is so well written that there is not one obscure line. We picture it, we feel it, we respond. What poet could ask for more? Raynette

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John Kay 29 September 2005

This is the real stuff that poetry is made of-one thing leads to another. See my poem 'The Kings of Heidelberg.'

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Keith Gaboury

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