But no friends,
You can't call
Any one your friend.
Also see
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Sir my humble suggestion would be for you to add a line...At your borthday party... after every verse or at the end of the poem. Sorry if i spoiled your birthday poem (party)
You are to see Your own face In your own mirror. Also you can say How bare How uncomfortable you are. introspection and self analysis two vital elements...... liked the idea.. Thanks