Friday, October 5, 2012

Birthday Of Mars Comments

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There is a Planet in a twirl of light
That offered its soul to a great might
That might is an angel, he is called Mars
His soul gives existence to all of us
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2012

Wow i enjoyd dis super rhyming brisk on a fav topic- mars.

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Aung Si 06 October 2012

Great words! Encore! Reading your poems makes my day!

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

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