Monday, November 7, 2011

Birthday Comments

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The bell chimed clear and high pitched,
It felt as if the night's silence had me ditched.

Who the hell was it to irritate me at midnight,
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Isabella Francis
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Abhishek Tiwari 12 November 2011

The last sentence has taken the poem towards a new dimension! Perhaps made it a bit tricky and left me with thoughts! Great use of metaphor Isa.. Keep it up!

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Felix John 08 November 2011

Im falling in love with your poems.it's a very nice poem.

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