Birthday Comments

can’t celebrate your day nor I like any one reminding me your arrival every year I wish with all my heart I could have forgotten you altogether I may not celebrate the birthday Life span may be reduced by that many days Can’t find solution with peaceful ways Nothing can help even hope and rays I seek rather blessings and solutions To deal the life with strong resolutions I wish I could render help to poor Ask for remedy from door to door Will it not be better ways to celebrate? Fruitful efforts with dedication to concentrate I may enjoy result with happiness and joy Let everybody rejoice and enjoy

i don't know how to comment or how to leave wrds for this poem, , , am sad after reading this..if this is written based on the real life, well...my gosh...so painful, so discouraging....i hope this is only a poem dear raj... naizz

This was a good poem I felt u shouldnt skip a lines

i like your style. birthdays make us wistful, passage of time and so many things to do before you sleep. hence live everyday as if there is no tomorrow is a good motto....10 Mamta