BIRTHDAY
On the seventeenth day of April
each year,
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Hope that one candle keeps burning bright for a long, long time. Lots of truths in this poem, thanks for it.
belated happy birthday. you have truly said that as we grow old we do a lot of growing up. i too put just one candle. we share the same zodiac sign. with age comes acceptance and your poem reveals the serenity and spiritual growth.
First let me wish you a belated happy B’day….I liked the concept of ONE candle…there are many positive aspects of this…the cake doesn’t get messy…them your jaws will not hurt blowing so many….but apart from this the emotion is serene graced with a great message…the wisdom is directly proportional to age…and this world is carried on such strong shoulders….Age is pure, refined with experience…your lines are smoothened with spirituality…
A nice poem, lovely.10+