Thursday, March 27, 2014

Birth Of Sunrise Comments

Rating: 4.6

After the setting of the radiant sun
when it was twilight.
The white birds had taken
All the rays of the light.
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Ruma Chaudhuri
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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2014

'Birth Of Sunrise' is a beautiful title to a beautiful poem. I've learnt the meaning of a new word, 'Chiaroscuro', thanks to you! The last stanza is superb! Men of work returned home At the end of the day. - Two simple lines, but I do not know why, I liked these two lines a lot. Peace flows through your lines. I like that too.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 April 2014

An English poet says-For every dark and troubled night, there is a day of sunny rest. Live happy and look happy in your poems as well. Agar tumhen koi dukh hay to yad rakho, acha samay beet geya to bura samay bhi beet jaye ga. Its a good poem.

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Ruma Chaudhuri

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