Sunday, July 27, 2008

Birth Of My Poem... Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am pregnant with a pink petite Poem
pulsating in my mind’s womb.
After months of creepy cramps,
countless kicks and
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Bharat Trivedi
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James B. Earley 07 August 2008

An exceptional view......'Birth of my poem'......for the poem is indeed a living....breathing....spiritual creation!

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Indira Renganathan 06 August 2008

Greetings and well wishes to your babe sir. Sure he will do wonders.Thanks for sharing

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Susan Jarvis 02 August 2008

I think every writer thinks of their poems as their children. You sound like a very proud father and quite rightly so. Good use of alliteration and imagery. I particularly enjoyed the opening lines. S :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 July 2008

When world is ugly it is time you bring out your beautiful baby blessing him to be the eleventh incarnation of the Almighty sathya narayana

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