Birth Of Death -Iii Comments
And Brahma forged a form— a female-head,
A mother of the need, of weird form—
Black as born of darkness, tongue and mouth red,
Eyes burning yellow, like a raging storm.
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A marvelous poem sir with wonderful rendition of words brilliantly put into 11 brilliant stanzas in epic form! I sincerely appreciate the way this magnificent piece of poetry is penned.................10/10
Thank you so much dear poet, please also read the last part as well and do give me your learned opinion.
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10/23/2025 5:03:44 PM # 1.0.0
A well penned narrative of Brahmin myth, your words flow smoothly as the sory unfolds.10+
Thank you really dear poet for the good words. Myths also render a valuable service. Today, science is working hard to find a solution from death and extend life as much as can be. Yet, death renders a helping hand and enables a new body and mind to continue with the evolutionary journey that is not possible to complete in one lifespan. We should learn to welcome death, especially when the body is become old and diseased.