In the aqueous placenta
Of Psychological
Feminine vitality,
The shapeless feotus
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Seema, you have really given a great birth to a verse! -Raj Nandy
Great piece Seema.Your learning has opened more versatile poems from you!
An eloquent write Seema! In this poem you have said it all - from A to Z - Splendidly! Best wishes! Friend Thad
Seema this is a magical feat! Wow! Ihave no words to express. This melding of poetry with love, making love is exquisite.........best poem.
i really words which you have chosen in you poem.. something different. thanks for sharing. a 10 for it mam. My place girl :)
Words were chosen so carefully to describe love's magical effect, great play of words...a 10.
I appreciate the way you have chosen your words..like 'Quintessential love'. Loved the Birth of the Verse...!
You will definitely be remembered as one of the greatest poets that ever walked this earth. Seema, great poetry. I wish I could say more. My heart is full and my eyes mist and I cant see. Its that good. God keep you safe and sound. What talent. God, give her everything she aspires for, for this is clearly a great soul.