Thursday, July 23, 2009

Birth Of A Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

a prisoner
of my own wish,
for loneliness.
my soul seperates
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ritty patnaik
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I love this poem.....it's like giving birth to an idea, a concept or a child and to each his own way of giving birth. I love the way you write.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 July 2009

different...and amazing. very true, though might seem abstract. loved it. thank you.

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 July 2009

ma'm, , , waht a wonderful poem.....a real pleasure to read and cogitate...I take this to my favs...10

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Raj Nandy 26 July 2009

Most of the time it is the pain and agony of a mother giving birth to her child, and when that child sees the light of day, all pain and agony gets driven away! 10! - Raj Nandy

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Bob Blackwell 24 July 2009

Ritty, this is wonderful, I like to think the words come from some special place, my best poems usually come after a period of quiet, then I just write as the words flow out of me. Regards Bob 10+

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Rakesh Bedi 23 July 2009

Very well composed, ritty!

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Ejaz Khan 23 July 2009

The newborn poem is beautiful, hope you had a nice trip! :)

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