Friday, April 27, 2007

Birth Of A Flower... Comments

Rating: 3.7

As I am a seed, planted inside the ground.
Ready to be nuture, by all type of caretaker.
As the mourning sun rises, gleaming on the other flowers.
While the time past by, im still in my final stage.
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Derrick Clark
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Ben Gieske 22 August 2007

Lots of deep feelings with which we can all relate.

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Patricia Bankhead 01 June 2007

I really love this poem. Well written Derrick.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 May 2007

WONDERFUL WRITING DERRICK, TEN WITHOUT FAIL Love duncan X

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 April 2007

lovely, we all have our time, roses, sunflowers or daisies. keep it up derrick.

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Derrick Clark

Derrick Clark

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