Birth Day....(My Friend's Birth Day) Comments

Oh that happens in life. So ironic. Sometimes fate kills our happiness. Beautifully rendered, the pain of separation.

Oh Afsos wali B'day lekin shairi wah khoob, . Very nicely written. Thumbs up again.

Kushiyaan mananey ka vakth aur bhi ayengey Yeh toh sirf vakth ka khel hai bas aagey chaltey jayiye! Beautiful write. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Tute dil se bhi dua'a nikle ye kamaal hai....Behte Ansuon mein bhi khushi chalke ye bemisaal hai Dard hote hue bhi Kisi ki hansi mein sharik hona ye Kabil-e-Taareef hai....10++

A shocking birthday but fruitful as it inspired to write such a lovely poem.

See, how happiness is celebrated and during break up this still gives little sorrow. Birthday brings happiness and still we wish all the best. Wishing your friend and you a very happy birthday. Wisely penned poem this is...10