Songs never written
Flowing softly and sweetly
Into the grand air
Their rhythm is joy and free
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The last line says it all, the sounds of bird songs are some of the most pleasant and alluring sounds to listen to. this poem is as sweet as the bird songs it captures. top marks!
Oh Wow! .. Such amazingly beautiful thoughts and imagery! .. That deeply touch the readers heart! .. So very inspirational! .. Definitely! ..5 Stars! ..++++++++++
Such beautiful gifts from God for us to enjoy every day. And, Rose Marie, you've captured the essence of that beauty. Really enjoyed this tanka!
Yes dear poetess, birds get no lyrics nor ant musical instruments, yet the melody just flow off from them. Wonders of the nature!