Thursday, May 19, 2022

Birdsongs - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

Songs never written
Flowing softly and sweetly
Into the grand air
Their rhythm is joy and free
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Yes dear poetess, birds get no lyrics nor ant musical instruments, yet the melody just flow off from them. Wonders of the nature!

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Kevin Patrick 03 June 2022

The last line says it all, the sounds of bird songs are some of the most pleasant and alluring sounds to listen to. this poem is as sweet as the bird songs it captures. top marks!

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Rebecca Navarre 26 May 2022

Oh Wow! .. Such amazingly beautiful thoughts and imagery! .. That deeply touch the readers heart! .. So very inspirational! .. Definitely! ..5 Stars! ..++++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 21 May 2022

Such beautiful gifts from God for us to enjoy every day. And, Rose Marie, you've captured the essence of that beauty. Really enjoyed this tanka!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 May 2022

I agree with Anjandev, Rose-Marie Thanks for sharing

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Anjandev Roy 21 May 2022

Never-ending mystery.....fantastic....thanks for sharing....

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Bill Cantrell 19 May 2022

Very well written

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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