Thursday, May 5, 2011

Birds Of Neighborhood Comments

Rating: 5.0

Daughters of freedom
Fetch some feathers of tender thoughts
To soothe the wounded hearts of dark despair
To tell the earth to look at the blue sky
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Meenu Alex
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Ashwin Alex 28 June 2011

nicley written words, super punch line! (no offence to anyone : In these days of degenerating decency of miami beach to washington when diplomacy and supercity become interchangable from complicated America to America....', crtsy: M Lal de wrld needs to knw life is simple! meenu: well written

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Kee Thampi 11 May 2011

a poem real feel of joy Once a little sparrow chirped its joy In words possessed with music Of the simple pleasure of flying to the ends And kissing each flower And looking for the dew And sucking sweet honey

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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