Friday, January 13, 2017

Birds Of A Feather.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I miss you, the next time I see you can I hold your hand?
It makes it easier, b/c against the world is where we stand
But against the wall is where I want you to be
The friction, adrenaline, my breathe all you'll be able to see
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Jeremy Willson
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Rod Schecter 02 April 2020

Jeremy can I be frank with you I don’t like this poem. Sincerely, Rod Schecter.

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Sister Frances 16 January 2017

OK I have to be honset I saw The Crow had visited this one but it's worth the rave.I seldom read long poems but this one kept me interested :) good poem

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Jeremy Willson 17 January 2017

Thanks for the read I'm happy you liked it :)

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