Birds Life Comments

beautiful poem/// birds fly here birds fly there birds fly everywhere wherever I live fair.........///

The poem caused me thrilled, birds' day's activities are exactly stated, thanks a lot

i like birds but i thought all they did was chase each other away from our bird feeders! i wanted to be a bird BEFORE reading this poem, BUT you make it sound like their life is too busy/complicated/difficult for my tastes; i don't want to work so hard! ! ! i now will remain the old, retired, lazy that i am. [[but the 'making of mates' DOES sound interesting; tell me more]. bri ;)

Bird life here almost sounds like human life as the patterns are so similar. A creative and compelling composition my friend!

That early in the morn Birds leave their haven, by these two lines the poem has been excellently started, very well done

Birds are wonderful creatures of Almighty Allah, as these creatures are beautiful and so helpful to all in hature, i love this great poem,10