Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Birds Know The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.5

There doesn't lie the bird
on her nest, she hasn't given birth...
Flying with the other
collecting twigs and constructing home...
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Kirti Sharma
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Valsa George 15 July 2014

They'll fly & fall & try. .......................................... Continue the life, they fly, they know the sky..! This is how a bird conquers the sky..... Beautiful poem! Enjoyed!

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2014

A beautiful poem, wonderful write.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2014

A beautiful poem, wonderful write.

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Saurav Singh 26 June 2014

wow, what a beautiful write! Beautiful way to outline the cycle, the challenges faced by one and over coming it. they fly and fly up in the sky! beautiful poem: -)

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Colleen Courtney 25 June 2014

What a wonderful poem on the cycle of life and letting go! It is truly amazing how animals seem to have an innate ability to know what it is they need to do to survive in the world. Your poem depicts this perfectly!

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