Friday, June 5, 2009

*birds In The Sky* Just For You Comments

Rating: 2.9

As i watch the birds in the sky,
I feel so happy,
As i walk to get over all the trials and tribulations of life.
The river weezes by,
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Rosalita Fern
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Obinna Eruchie 18 June 2009

A wonderful sight seeing. Good.

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Nature is a wonderful way to forget one's troubles. Reading it made me feel so peaceful. There are so many happy bits to enjoy throughout. A big 10 and smile from me. Karin Anderson

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Smiley Hooker 16 June 2009

Thank you for keeping me smiling with your lovely poem, dear.: -)

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Anjali Sinha 15 June 2009

wowwwwwww nature and sunshines for all -10 anjali

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Gordon Wilkinson 11 June 2009

very cute poem - full of sunshine smiles

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 June 2009

'I ask the sun to keep shinning, I ask the sun to remain. I ask the sun to keep bringing the smile to faces who so desperatly need one.' Amazing poem, I love the above lines most.10+++

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girl. this is a really fantastic poem

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Alen Alexander 09 June 2009

a plea to the sun, who brings the the light that breaks through times, when we go down! good poem =]

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