Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Birds In The Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who came to me with the monsoon clouds,
Without any thunders only birds' applauds,
Feathers when clapped like palms of a child,
Winds adding something to a love so wild,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2016

Monsoon clouds are amazing in imagery. Birds'message is wonderfully read. Following the life taught by imagery is amazing. Very wisely penned poem is shared here.10

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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2016

Each word was the sound-equivalent of an experience, It is mantra, the compulsion to create a mental image....Lovely poem with creative title....100++

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Khalid Saifullah 28 September 2016

So beautiful........................................................

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Nosheen Irfan 28 September 2016

Beautiful write from your poetic pen. Lovely imagery throughout with a very enticing title.10

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