Birds In The Battle Field Comments

Little birds are weeping. good

This is a very good poem Vinod - you have captured the essence of war quite succinctly. It has the quiet surety of a Rupert Brooke - who is, as you may well know, one of the most respected of 'War poets.' Please have a read of my 'Running for Cover' and give me your opinion. Many thanks and well done! Kevin

Voise of Ambulance Noise of crowd `n` cry Guns and tons of memories........Well written.The Kharasch Effect of representing war crimes considered to be fair..

The panick, the sadness, the desolation. I hear it all in this poem. Such over whelming sadness. thank you for inviting me to read your poetry. I am new here. I will share my own in time.

This is rather good and I appreciate the attention to spelling and grammatical structure. Something that many of your countrymen ignore. May I point out that 'voice' has a 'c' and I think you may have meant 'shower of missiles’. Please read mine - Time For Another - Adeline

Very humane poetry…against uncalled for and unnecessary violence/war for vested interests strangling human rights…the day may come when the tears of birds will get parched up like humans … thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

one more good war poem... you've voiced for the tree dwellers... awesome.. i've got one strikingly similar poem.. kindly check it out... title: 'A starling in solitude'.

Such heartfelt feelings You make us weep With the lil' birds Thinking of aftermath of war! Please read my 'Victims of War' and 'War' at your liesure. Angel

In a lonley dry tree Little birds are weeping The mother collecting The half burned grains..... If someone can read these lines to the warlords military leaders!

Wodrs appear so simple But emotions so complex. How many care to look up the tree From where falls the shower of grief. Blessed are those who are laid on the ground Left behind.. are left with so much to sigh and cry. Touched by this read. Thank you.

i can imagine the scene..awesome writing ^-^

vivid poignant and touching I like this a lot. a very nice piece great writing. a 10

Very powerful and evocative.The pathos of the last stanza resonates with this reader. 10 for you. Warm regards, Sandra

A very authentic ending.....the way poetry should be.

V illains in the war i ndulge in killing innocents n ot knowing that o n the other side d ear little creatures u nknown to human care k illed as too collateral!