Birds, How Can I Be.. Comments

Circling in the encircling space Fluttering dancing in immense grace Squeak and screech in immeasurable joy Surging surfingnever to cloy.....After reading your poem carefully i wished if i were a bird.. thank you. tony

Wow---It is such a beautiful poem! To my poem list.

An excellent poem dear madam! Liked it

I love this poem, very deep. Wonderful write 10++

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I am just flabbergasted... I remember, i wrote in my biography 'I do want to share my writings here To know how much similar / different We writers feel.' This is the perfect thing to get inspired. Weightless Bird, my goodness I had just posted 2 days ago... And here is this.. sitting pretty over the days. Birds are amazing...but i do feel sad for them When they get soaked in the rain Sit on the branch and blink at us. Rest all other feature.. they are just amazing You observation is too fine gripped.

Beautiful write...so pleasing to read...rich with nice rhyme and rhythm...in Emily Dickinson style...thanks...10

How can I be your mind Dispatching mine sudden behind...wonderful opening of mind and beautiful write i must say..all honest words andsimpre presentation...10 read mine' miss, I miss you, butterfleis around and anywhere

Wonderful! It's like I'm reading my own thoughts here. Thanks for sharing.: -)

....Circling in the Encircling space.... I found it fascinating! Don't you think Indira, all of us are occupied in that, even after being on earth? !

Your words took flight - made me feel free and wanting to soar. Thanks, we must learn not to take baggage with us, start each day anew.

How can I be your mind Dispatching mine sudden behind ------ Fabulous couplets pouring...well structured, fine diction...10+++

Marvelous composition, cute poem.

'Soar, soar o'weightless hearts Weightless I say, on your worriless hearts' O to be a bird and soar high to new places without any baggage or any cares...Lovely piece Indira

always we wish.......let our wishes fulfilled........

huge flight of words.... everyone wishes to b a bird... nice poem.

WANTING TO FLY...A VERY NATURAL YEARNING OF MAN...DEFINITELY THEY HAVE A LIGHTER HEART....VERY WELL WRITTEN MAM