Friday, November 9, 2007

Birds Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little too tall for me
Beautiful flowing hair
Over a tailored jacket
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Tom J. Mariani
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Ben Gieske 14 December 2007

I like the first part of this with its flow and swing and pauses. Don't know exactly what to make of the comparison with the bird and the noise.

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

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