Birds Eye View Comments

Magnificent poem. Soul filling. Spotless construction. Perfect imagery and diction 10++

You made me feel like a bird high in the sky viewing all this beautiful planet you are a great story teller thankyou Valerie a gem of a poem...regards

Flying high Val. The earth seems so much cleaner from a distance. Especially when the story unfolds in impeccable rhyme.

What a beautiful mind God has created in you. To be able to put togeather such lovely words to discribe what you see. Marvelous poems. Alice

I'm amazed at how your imagination can create these vivid scenes, perfectly portrayed in perfect rhyme, this one is a real beauty......

Had to grin when you mentioned PH tricks. Have seen a few. Thought this one might have an Escher theme. May not be Escher but still a treat to read. An Emily Dickenson Theory is now on my site. Adeline

Bird's Eye View provides an excellent view of the surrounding place in wonderful rhyme scheme! Beautiful! !

I like not only the beautiful verses but also the style! Pls have a glance to my poem Life Vs Land and advise me! Regards! ! ! ! !

A great travel poem with wonderful imagery.

As already stated, this poem has a musical quality to it. I really enjoyed it.

Indeed a visual treat...nonpareil! ! !

It's poems like this that inspire me to write! Beautiful! ! ! Dawn x

One of your best. I thoughly enjoyed the theme, the descriptions, the language use and rhyme. Masterful handling.

simply amazing, you have a true gift! Best of luck. -April :)

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! ! ! ! ! ! Just beautiful.

This is not just a poem but a painting as well, as you can picture it in your mind. A brilliant piece of work Valerie.

You are a very gifted poet, these words cast a spell of wonder...

There are such lovely lines in here..almost musical, I'd say. (smile)

This is exceptional Valerie in description, atmosphere and visual suggestions... Wonderful! ! ! ! l.., . Karen

Outstanding. Imaginatively insightful, Takes you on an incredibly enjoyable journey. A real pleasure to read, Valerie.