Monday, October 14, 2019

Birds Borderless Bonding Well Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah borderless birds ever so cute
That believed in no border dispute,
Yet, at the embassy level
The matter was placed still.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 17 October 2019

borderless freedom birds flying hither to thither as their wish without any harm spreading on the sky the beautiful charm ...............////

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 October 2019

Yes, you've hit the nail, thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2019

Birds! ! ! Flying around the World! ! ! ! Freedom, Nature love, From one country to another. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

Yes, indeed, birds flying around the world in freedom to border-less countries, you are right. Thanks for reading this ditty.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2019

Migration of birds is well executed. I want to cite here...... A bird had come from far across To spend winter in warmer climes, To them border made no good rhymes— To them human concerns were gross. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

We humans never seem to learn from nature, even from birds whom we call bird-brains. Thank you for reading and liking it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2019

Beautifully penned sir! My favorite lines: A bird had come from far across/To spend winter in warmer climes/To them border made no good rhymes—To them human concerns were gross. Full marks

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 October 2019

We call them as bird-brains, but that perhaps applies to humans. Thanks dear Dr Swain for the good words.

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